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Ed Houles

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Date Story Comments from Ed Houles Gentle's response Rating
19/07/2006 8:18:03 p.m. Gathering in the Green Hmmm. Rather a departure for you. No, I'm not sure it's particularly to my taste, but that's not to take away anything from your craft. Thanks a lot. I'm aware that this is somewhat 'audience limiting'. I'd like to see how it goes.
16/06/2006 8:10:26 p.m. Photographic Memory 3 I kinda feel like I'm in the twilight zone :-)
27/05/2006 2:01:43 a.m. Photographic Memory 1 It's pretty clear the type of girl who lives in your mind. Unashamed, as aggressive as necessary, and always lighthearted. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go, and guessing the camera & tripod may play a role. Thanks. I needed a new title for this, having already used the one I wanted, and this got me thinking...
23/05/2006 1:51:34 a.m. Stand and Deliver Fun story. I'd like to meet her sometime myself! Hell, I'm not sure I'd want to...
24/04/2006 9:17:41 p.m. It starts with a castle Part 6 Oh God she’s such a slut. How do I meet someone like that??! You need a castle...
24/03/2006 6:11:13 p.m. It starts with a castle Part 5 What do I think? Clearly, quality takes time. That's very... Unclear. :-)
15/03/2006 8:08:23 p.m. Statuesque "The skin lower down my torso provided some kind of relief, like just the right amount of sugar with tart strawberries." OMG that is brilliant! An outstanding analogy! Thanks!
12/03/2006 3:34:52 p.m. Tennis panties I chimed in here because it was seriously underrated. Albeit too short like the dress?
23/02/2006 8:11:23 p.m. The Road to Hell - Day 3b You're a right bastard for that ending -- you know that don't you? Yeah! :-)
27/01/2006 6:54:34 p.m. The Road to Hell - Day 3 It was a fun read. Thanks! Just as well. Onward! :-)
13/01/2006 10:09:41 p.m. The Road to Hell - Day 2 Oh, yes Oooh, a puppy dog. :-)
2/12/2005 8:22:48 p.m. The Game - Part 3 - Taking your turn It's top ten stuff. Thanks Ed.
23/10/2005 1:55:47 a.m. The Adventurous Matilda Tapley - Chapter 1- Nineteen Do you like it? Hell yes! Thanks Ed. And thanks so very much for the editing assistance as well!
18/10/2005 5:38:56 p.m. Milo Whew. I hadn't seen that one before. What an awesome fantasy! Gosh, suddenly it's awfully warm in here. I definintely want to try Milo. Oh, and maybe the drink, too :) I know I got your comment under false pretences Ed, so why not steal it and add it to the page as well? :-)
21/09/2005 10:26:41 p.m. This is the girl... It's quite artistic, don't you know. Is it? Fluke, Ed. :-)
14/09/2005 6:27:37 p.m. No Sequel Not that there's anything I'd have changed, nor are there typos that I caught. It's quite fine, of course; the dialogue is certainly up to your usual standard. :-)
25/08/2005 6:02:15 p.m. Allison's Long Weekend - Part 1 Holy cow, that's freakin' HOT. wow... my first comment and i couldnt ask for a comment any nicer.... Thank you!
19/08/2005 10:44:07 p.m. Kimberly might not have been drunk First, let me find my oxygen tank. Whew -- that last couple of paragraphs was deadly (in a good way, of course). I should have put them at the beginning!
18/08/2005 7:32:50 p.m. Hey gorgeous Oddly enough, I find myself hungry for fajitas :) Fun story -- thanks! Good stuff at all times!
18/08/2005 7:26:36 p.m. Digitally Part 4 At the risk of repeating myself, I *really* want to be Joe. I'm pretty sure no one has ever said to me "please fuck me now." I think I'll put that on the list of things I want to happen before I die. As always, an outstanding effort! Thanks Ed. I'll send someone over to whisper in your ear!
27/07/2005 4:34:55 a.m. The doorstep Very fun. Very naughty. I really liked the spontenaiety. Thanks Ed.
30/05/2005 5:34:04 p.m. The Swap Part 5 Quite hot, all the way through. Nicely done. Thanks Ed.
12/05/2005 6:53:23 p.m. Pinball One of your earlier works? Well, yes, but I quite liked it, actually... :-)
18/12/2004 The Shower It's bloody good, you know.
11/12/2004 Twas the night LOL, that was a good laugh. Thanks for that. How on earth do you keep your mind so bloody fertile??? Must be something in the water.
30/11/2004 Vivian Didn't recall having read 'Vivian', so I just took a look. Nicely done. Thanks Ed
20/11/2004 Summer Yet another truly excellent story. I really want to meet this girl - someone who enjoys arousal like that, and who knows her body so well, is a rare gem indeed! I wouldn't mind meeting her myself, Ed!
26/10/2004 The Billy Goats Gruff - and the Troll GBF has taken on the thankless task of updating a Grimm tale for audiences of 21st century erotica. The heroine, Lucinda, finds herself in a comprimising situation with the eldest of the brothers Gruff. Lest the gentle reader be concerned that dear Lucinda finds herself subjected to unwanted advances of a zoological nature, rest assured that the attendant perversions are, at least initially, simply of a MMMF nature. The 'zoo' code, if such is to be, would follow in due course. After the denoument, with characteristic angst, our heroine discovers that endowment conquers all -- surely an allegory for our modern age. Here, Ed! Trolls ain't animools, are they? Huh? Thanks mate. I'm most impressed. Can you talk to book publishers like that too?
2/10/2004 Digitally Part 3 Well, Gentle, that series is simply a wet dream. Good heavens <*fanning himself*>! Shall I begin the chant? Part IV, part IV ... Part 3 nearly killed me. Of course it wasn't too bad for Joe...
28/09/2004 Sally Your "Sally" popped up on the 'recommended reading' at SoL, so I had a look. Yet another damned good read! For my own sanity I have to think that you have a primo stable of editors -- being a repressed editor myself, I usually have part of my mind in that mode when I'm reading stories. Didn't notice anything. If that was a wholly solo effort, well, let's just say 'bloody impressive' and leave it at that. Thanks Ed. I'm afraid I have to take all the blame for that one...
21/09/2004 Terry Nice twist! I didn't see that one coming. That was a fun read, thank you.
14/09/2004 The Ritual I don't usually go for stories set in fantasy worlds, but I'm glad I made the exception. That was tremendously hot. I think my heart rate's still too high. That's the first of your stories I've read, but I will certainly check out others!